nucleus poem
It was invented in 2015 by Singapore-based Bangladeshi poet Syedur Rahman Liton. In his words, it is “an epoch-making poem of present world, prepared in a special model”.
Initially used to create poetry in Bengali, it was rapidly embraced by a diverse range of poets in the migrant worker and volunteer community. Examples now exist in English, Tagalog, Bahasa Indonesia and Tamil.
Contents
- 1 Structure
- 2 Examples
Structure
A nucleus poem consists of four lines. The number of syllables in each line corresponds to the number of electrons in each sublevel of the electron shell.
- The first line contains 2 syllables.
- The second line contains 8 syllables.
- The third line contains 18 syllables.
- The fourth line contains anywhere from 1 to 32 syllables.
Examples
Nucleus
Poem 1, by Syedur Rahman Liton (original and English translation)
Fie! Fie!
Those who are failed to operate democracy
Made blood machine, are shown shame
I want relief of blood.
Those who are failed to operate democracy
Made blood machine, are shown shame
I want relief of blood.
Nucleus Poem 2, by Syedur Rahman Liton (original and English translation)
O,
Dreamland islander
You sweetsmiler in sudden movement,
Came in my lie, you Cobra.
Dreamland islander
You sweetsmiler in sudden movement,
Came in my lie, you Cobra.
Words that roll off his very tongue,
Words I will never understand, words though that speak volumes, that resonate;
I understood him
Words I will never understand, words though that speak volumes, that resonate;
I understood him
References:
Rahman Liton, Syedur. Nucleus Poetry. Dhaka: Goti Prokashoni, 2016.
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